Sunday, 9 November 2014

Kevin Chong on Writing Biography - at SIWC 2014

Workshop:  “Mapping Another Life” (Writing Biography)

Kevin Chong, born in Hong Kong, educated (MFA in fiction writing) at the University of British Columbia, lives and works in Vancouver. 


Kevin teaches writing creative fiction and writing creative nonfiction (beginner to advanced levels) at UBC and SFU (and gets an “A” on Rate-My-Professors with a  chili-pepper on the 'hotness' rating).  




He's the author of: 


 Nonfiction
  • Northern Dancer: The Legendary Horse that Inspired a Nation, 2014
  • My Year of The Race Horse, 2012
  • Neil Young Nation: a quest, an obsession, and a true story, 2005. (Crisscrossing the continent, Chong follows the route that led Neil Young to become a musical legend.)

Novels
  • Beauty Plus Pity, 2011
  • Baroque-a-Nova, 2001

A volunteer introducer reads the intro to Kevin’s workshop which says he’s “a showdog handler and jazz musician.” When she concludes, Kevin tells us it’s all lies.
“My first tip on writing biography is not to use Wikipedia,” he quips. Apparently a friend and he had some kind of gag that resulted in this information going into his Wikipedia biography and there it remains, untrue.
Background to Northern Dancer

--how in Northern Dancer his tack was to write about the people who loved the horse:
·        E.P. Taylor (owner);
·        The Argentinian trainer. Quite a character: asked what he wanted after he died, he said he wanted to be “turned into a woman’s saddle so I can be between the two things I loved the most.”
·        Jockey Bill Hartack

--and about how Canada was in 1964 (Kevin was born in 1975). The only people he talked to were  some riders and that was by phone.
“I remember Canada being much more insecure than it is now. We didn’t feel we could beat the best. Then Northern Dancer showed we could beat the best.”
Kevin’s own experience in horse-racing before he wrote ND:  he’d written one book about it before, about how he bought a horse at Hastings Racetrack which had some Northern Dancer blood.   
Kevin talked about the many things you need to consider before you start the actual writing.
About biography subjects:
·       Does he/she have to be famous?
·       Does he/she have to be human? Can write bios of inanimate objects, e.g., Salt; or The Suit,a book by JJ Lee that wove in stories about his father, a tailor. There are sometimes called “cultural histories.”
·       Does the subject have to be one person (companies> corporate histories)?
Ways you can write about a life:
·       Memoir – can be writing about segments/periods in your life – i.e. just divorced and took a trip to Italy; your lifelong interest in soccer; an interest in your life – e.g. The 100 Mi. Diet
·       Autobiography – Writing about your own life, the world that you came from. You try not to skip  any of the events of your life (but they may  be separate books).
·       Biography (“I consider bio to be cradle to dotage”)
·       Co-authored Autobiography – examples: Facebook’s Sheryl Sandberg’s; Justin Trudeau’s
Considerations about the book, approaches to the subject, etc.
·       How will your book be different?
·       Initial Research >Writing a proposal. “Before you travel to Paris – has anyone else written a book on your subject? Check on the internet.”
·       Is the person still alive? Do they want to work with you? Or if recently deceased, is there anyone else working on an authorized biography?
·       Tip: approach your subject with a thesis or a statement or a question – so the bio does not become a recitation of dry facts.  “He was born… died…..”
·       His thesis for Northern Dancer - that ND “changed the way Canadians felt about themselves in 1964. Northern Dancer was a hero when the country really needed one.” (i.e. we were between having been a colony of Britain and becoming a kind of economic colony of the U.S.)
·       If you’re writing your own life, you might want to talk to key figures in it. Your spouse and “If you’re brave, your former spouse. “Their actual sense of what happened might be different from yours.”
Subject - Living person:
·       Interviews - let them pick the place, their comfort area; bring a list of questions but be flexible.
·       Famous person – “go sideways a bit.”
·       Don’t be afraid of awkward pauses – they may fill them with something interesting.
·       Good to have a recorder. Yet the technique of, at some point, turning the recorder off: “People become more animated. but you are still taking notes.”
·       For famous or other people – you want to speak to anyone who knows about them – people who knew them as kids. About the middle age years ,talk to their children).
·       Talk to their enemies.
·       Other sources: news clips – magazine profiles (how they felt in 1963 vs. say 2014). Then can ask them about why they felt a certain way back when they did.
·       Old photos – present them to the subject – sparks new memories.
                                                                                                                    
Subject - deceased person:
·         Library and archival research; travel to [pertinent] locales.
·         Interviews – Experts on that person work or on the era or place that person lived; regional content.  It may tell you about their influence, influence of their work, etc.
·         Kevin made a trip to Ottawa for Northern Dancer. Had to get permission to access the archives. Became sticky because the person designated by EP Taylor to give acces had died – so Kevi had to prove to the archives that Taylor’s grandsons had the authority to grant him access.

Why you?
Why are you the one who needs to tell the story?  Could be important.

Other considerations:
·       Question from audience: Have there been themes or motives for what Kevin’s written about? Answer: I wanted to know more about a subject. So I don’t start off as an expert - e.g., the  Neil Young book: “I needed to write my own personal biographical story about being a fan of his.”
·       His first book was on a racehorse: “I wanted to learn more about horse racing and folded in my own anxiety about a young adult who had accomplished what I wanted to do in life. I was hoping other YAs, who had crossed things off on their list, could identify what he was going through.”

Structure
·       Suppose someone’s accomplishments were in midlife, you might not have the chronology go from 20 yrs. to 80 yrs. in the same intensity.
·       First in Northern Dancer, he used an unconventional order, then his editor’s suggestion, told it chronologically – thought it was clearer
·       Tip:  “A lot of biographies start off with a scene from the middle of the life – then go to the early days. We want to get a sense of hwy this person is important/interesting/etc. (example – he used the EP Taylor anecdote right off about going into the mid-Atlantic lifeboat in his pajamas).(c)
·       Tense (thinkinga bout which to use – present, past). He did Northern Dancer in the present tense.

·       Voice - finding your authorial voice – Objective or journalistic or opinionated? Considerations: Closeness to your subject. What’s the approach that best serves the story?


--Margo Lamont

(c)2014 Margo Lamont 


Monday, 3 November 2014

Writing Historical Fiction: Guided Hallucination into the Past - with Roberta Rich. Workshop notes.




Roberta Rich is local, lives in Vancouver and divides her time between the Raincoast and a place in Mexico. She's a retired divorce lawyer, is incredibly well organized, articulate and gives good workshop.

These are notes from her workshop on Writing Historical Fiction at the 2014 Surrey International Writers Conference last month. 








Her two books are The Harem

Midwife 
(Doubleday 2013)







and her first published book,

the bestseller, The Midwife

of Venice
(2010). 

What’s wonderful about The Midwife of Venice is, it flies in the face of that MFA-in-Creative-Writing mantra you hear endlessly – “Write about what you know."

Well, being a divorce lawyer and all, Roberta started out by writing two detective novels featuring a lawyer, that “went nowhere.” 

She had never so much tipped a red-painted toenail in a Venice canal before she wrote The Midwife of Venice. That’s very encouraging somehow.  “I think the better advice is," she says, "write what you can imagine -- write about what turns your crank!” 
                                 
She told us that for her writing historical fiction is like “standing inside a beautiful painting (I often think a Canaletto) and then saying, Come inside and I’ll tell you about how they slept and lived and loved…”


Don’t obsess about being obsessed by an historical era.
When she polled the room, everybody in attendance had an particular place and historical era they were (for lack of a better word) fixated on. "Obsessed is good,” Roberta said. “If we’re not obsessed when we start, it’s going to be very hard to get to the finish line. But let’s call it passion.”

Genitals “bewitched”              
“History sometimes throws you a bone,” she said. She recalled how in her wide-ranging reading around her historical subject and era, she’d read a story about how a king’s genitals had been bewitched by his wife so that -- though he could have had his pick of women and had a harem -- he stayed faithful to is wife through their 20 year marriage.  "This got my wheels turning. Reading about your era sometimes inspires your plot.”  
                                                                                                              
Lady in black
Roberta is wearing all-black top and pants, a string of off-white pearls too big to be real, and open-toed sandals with bare feet & red toenails at the end of October. Like the rest of us at the end of an unusually magnificent summer in Vancouver, she's not ready yet to give up on that season. Her white hair is shortish, straight, no-nonsense. Her glasses have black arms; her purse is brown leather. Small studs in her ears look like real diamonds. She is slim, mid-60s, wears gold rings on each hand, a glint of largish diamonds from the left, and mentions her husband several times.

Get a little help from your friends (or acquaintances)
“Cultivate people who are better educated than you are. Take them out to lunch, buy them bottle of wine.” 

Anecdote: She wanted to make her midwife the best in Venice, and wanted to show that it was because she’d invented a special tool -- say, a primitive forceps -- but she wasn't quite sure if that was something that would have been done at the time. So she took an historian friend out for lunch and told her about her research. The historian said that people in those days as a matter of course made their own tools and why would a midwife not have made some kind of tool like forceps for delivering babies?  Whew: green light. 

So how do you organize your research, we asked
“I read books from the library, I buy a lot, I use inter-library loans. I write notes and put everything in one big file. Then I use the search feature and type in, say,"galleys.” And I use lots of Post-It™ notes. I buy a lot of books, probably more books than I need because it’s easy to get sidetracked and not know when to stop.”

The Novel-writing Avoidance Program

“I have what my husband calls my Novel-writing Avoidance Program.” From researching soap-making, she actually morphed into making unguent creams in the basement. In fact she uses a jar of her homemade cream as a prize later for whoever comes up with the best bit in a free-write she gives us.

Backgrounds and settings
“Sometimes the setting is almost a character itself—Gone With the Wind or A Tale of Two Cities. “It’s a historical cauldron into which you place your characters.”

Dialogue - go for 'Bygonese'
“Avoid anachronisms. There’s a learning curve – as in Downton Abbey.”  Some of the unfortunate standouts in this respect was someone using the phrases “charm offensive” and  “feeding frenzy” in a book about the Medicis. 

“Your goal is not to reproduce how people spoke two hundred years ago.” As a divorce lawyer, she read through many transcripts: “That is not dialogue.” Strive, she said, “for what David Mitchell calls ‘Bygonese’.” So: 
  • Don’t use contractions. 
  • Use ‘shall’ not ‘will.’  
  • Instead of ‘if’' use 'had I [bought...]’  
  • Beware anachronisms – e.g., 'silhouette' comes from a French politician Étienne de Silhouette in the 1700s, so if your book is set in ancient Egypt........
  • If in doubt, go to etymologyonline.com and check it out.

Other hints
  • Read novels that are set in your time period. If you’re writing about England in Thomas Hardy times, read some of his novels.
  • “You can’t libel the dead. I can say that as a lawyer.” But use ethics in your conjectures about real historical people.
  • Auditory imagery is “vastly neglected, but it's one of the most powerful things we can impart to a reader.”
  
Further reading and watching:
Globe & Mail review of Midwife of Venice


At workshop’s end Roberta wishes us well. She hopes, she says, that she has inspired us to write our historical fictions à la the painter Delacroix who said:  “I rush to my studio as eagerly as other men rush to their mistresses.”


Small but interesting fact-ettes about RR:
Time in the morning by which she
is usually at her computer:


8 AM
Favourite drink:
Margarita, “ideally made with limes”
Minimum # of words she writes a day:
500 to 1,000
What she thinks you “have to keep playing on”:
“People’s tremendous curiosity”
No. 1 tip for writers:
“The ability to sit on your behind for a long time: patience, endurance Don’t wait for inspiration: just turn on the hard drive and tap away.”
Title of Roberta's detective novel that
Toronto agent Beverley Slopen shopped
around but got nowhere with:


Tequila Moon
For more insights, read her answers to
The Proust Questionnaire:


  
  • Read "20 writerly questions" of RR's here. 
"11. Who is the first person who gets to you read your manuscript?  I belong to a writers group which meets every three weeks. We have been writing pals for 15 years. They are my first and the best critics."

Grind Writers group members: If you’d like a PDF of her excellent 5-page handout email:  grindwriters@gmal.com


-- Margo Lamont

(c)2014 Margo Lamont


Monday, 20 October 2014

GRIND WRITERS - MEETING DATES 2014


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Nov 1
Sunday
Nov 16
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Nov 29
Sunday
Dec 14


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Friday, 3 October 2014

Rx in Your Pen: Something Surprising About People Who Love to Write


Science Shows Something Surprising About People
Who Love to Write
 

“No matter the quality of your prose, the act of writing itself leads to strong physical and mental health benefits, like long-term improvements in mood, stress levels and depressive symptoms.  
“In a 2005 study on the emotional and physical health benefits of expressive writing, researchers found that just 15 to 20 minutes of writing three to five times over the course of the four-month study was enough to make a difference. 
“It turns out writing can make physical wounds heal faster as well.”





Thursday, 2 October 2014

GRIND WRITERS NEWS - OCTOBER 2014





























CONTENTS: 
– $20,000 for a 100-word story. Yes!
– Midnight in Paris
– The Rx in Your Pen
– Lost Your Mojo?
– Do You Write Dark?
– Submit.  (You know you want to.)  – Stuff about … stuff
– Twisted Poets
– Wordplay
– Things to do, places to go….
– Book Talks.  And a Poetry Day with David Whyte
– Royal City Writing
– Grind Writers - where we meet, when, but not why
– The free-write photo prompt.  Just do it!

Read the Grind Writers News online at Issuu.com here.





Thursday, 25 September 2014

MEETING DATES 2014 - GRIND WRITERS GROUP


THE GRIND WRITERS 
2014
Meeting Dates

10am - 12:30pm

Sat
Oct 4
Out trip – not meeting @ the Grind
Sun
Oct 19

Sat
Nov 1

Sun
Nov 16

Sat
Nov 29

Sun
Dec 14










Tuesday, 16 September 2014

Medicine in Your Pen - the Writing Rx

Science Shows Something Surprising About People Who Love to Write

“The benefits of writing go far beyond building up your vocabulary. No matter the quality of your prose, the act of writing itself leads to strong physical and mental health benefits, like long-term improvements in mood, stress levels and depressive symptoms. 

“
In a 2005 study on the emotional and physical health benefits of expressive writing, researchers found that just 15 to 20 minutes of writing three to five times over the course of the four-month study was enough to make a difference. 

“By writing about traumatic, stressful or emotional events, participants were significantly more likely to have fewer illnesses and be less affected by trauma. Participants ultimately spent less time in the hospital, enjoyed lower blood pressure and had better liver functionality than their counterparts.
“It turns out writing can make physical wounds heal faster as well.”


You'll want to read the whole article by Rachel Grate  
(Sept 15, 2014) here: 






Sunday, 7 September 2014

GRIND WRITERS NEWS SEPT 2014: Still a little juice left in summer edition

The STILL A LITTLE JUICE LEFT IN SUMMER edition.

Contents:

Who says crime don’t pay? 
Detective fiction in Canada
Lost your mojo? Maybe Bonnie Nish can help
Psst. Does your manuscript have something to tell you?
Submit. (You know you want to.)
A call for spooky
Wordplay in the Royal City
Stuff about … stuff
Things to do, places to go….
Book Talks – a Vancouver book club
A novel process
Open mics - not just for poets
Grind Writers – where we meet, when, but not why 

The free-write photo prompt. Just do it!






Wednesday, 13 August 2014

Robin Williams


Writing prompt:

Robin Williams' death: how has it affected you? What sort of issues has his suicide caused you to think about? 


Bring your output to the next meeting.
 ________________________

About writing to a prompt

Get your writing stuff ready.
Set a timer for 15 minutes.
Don’t think it.
Just start writing.
Keep going.
No stopping.
No editing (that comes later).
Forget grammar. Forget spelling.
Forget any “rules” you’ve ever been told.
Forget everything else and just write.
Now.